Draft & Finished Music Video

This is my A2 music video draft.
I posted the unfinished video on my FaceBook Wall so that I could collect the opinions and advice of the audience. Some of the advice given seemed helpful, for example saying that the relationship of the scene and the song itself was off in that the timing was missing.
The advice collected was crucial for the development and adjustments put into my finished piece.


https://www.facebook.com/maxime.curdy.9/videos/1066462153396275/


This is the finished result, with some small adjustments in the beginning scenes and, clearly, the last portion of the song.